考研英語寫作拿高分的十大要領(lǐng)

1.題目要認(rèn)清

絕對不能提筆就寫,而是應(yīng)該認(rèn)真審題,看清題目的要求和提示,充分利用題目所提供的信息、關(guān)鍵詞所圈定的范圍,在確立主題后再動(dòng)筆。 如 從標(biāo)題 The Misery of Shyness 中得知,考生不但要解釋說明 Shyness ,更重要的是要突出由 Shyness 帶來的Misery 。至此,短文要重點(diǎn)闡述帶來了什么Misery 。

2.文體要統(tǒng)一

正式文體的文章不宜用非正式的語句。有些考生在一篇很正式的議論文中用以下的句子做結(jié)語 OK,this is what I want to say.或是That’Smy opinion. Do you agree withme？等等,使文章顯得 不倫不類 。

3.主題要突出

標(biāo)題如果是 Pollution from Cars 或 Air Pollution ,以下段落的闡述顯得有些贅述 1 Part of this problem is the world’Sexploding population.2 A growing population undoubtedly means more factories polluting the air.3 Besides, land and water pollution has also increased.4 Pollutionis, in fact, threatening our health, our happiness, and our civilization.尤其是第三句,還有點(diǎn) 跑題 。

4.文字要連貫

一篇好文章要注重連貫性。連貫性主要體現(xiàn)在句子與句子、段落與段落的銜接上,這種銜接要通過過渡詞語來實(shí)現(xiàn),以達(dá)到文章通順,語言流暢。例如 ITis clear that television news can vividly bring into us dramatic events of importance, such as wars, games and soon, but it can not cover important stories in detail they may deserve because of its time limitation. On the contrary, print news excels in its ability to devote as much space to a story as it sees fit, though it can not compete with television visually. Besides, television is essentially a passive medium. suchas, but, becauseof, on the contrary, though, besides 這些過渡詞把句子從語義上連接起來,形成一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體,讀起來猶如行云流水,自然酣暢。

5.內(nèi)容要一致

要?jiǎng)h除多余的詞語,否則,一是破壞了文章的一致性,二是有 湊字?jǐn)?shù) 之嫌。如

1 Scientists fear that nuclear energy will one day destroyus.2 They say that the explosion of a nuclear bomb can kill millions of people and cause disease and deformity in later generation.3 Because of limited energy resources, scientists are studying the possibilities of nuclear power.4 And any failure from a nuclear plant may cause enormous damage to the affected area5 What’Smore, up to now people have not discovered a safe way to dispose of radioactive wastes.

本段中的第三句與主題不符,也與第二和第四句不連貫,應(yīng)刪除。

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