Section IV Writing
Part A
Suppose you won a translation contest and your friend Jack wrote an email to congratulate you, and ask advice on translation. Write him a reply to
1)thank him;
2)give your advice.
You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET. Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead. Do not write the address .(10 point)
參考譯文
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.
As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. First and foremost, I strongly suggest you that you need to practice with painstaking effort in this field. What’s more, you had better have more communication with foreigners, which guarantees that you have a deep understanding of foreign culture. Last but not least, you are supposed to participate in some international events to accumulate a wealth of practical experience.
Thanks again and I do hope you could take my suggestions into consideration. I wish you have good luck and make a great success in your future study.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
如大家所見，這是2016年英語二小作文題目。英語（二)考綱的寫作部分，其實(shí)主要考查學(xué)生的應(yīng)用能力，考查范圍包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、報(bào)告等，還應(yīng)能寫一般描述性、敘述性和說明或議論性的文章；而要求考生根據(jù)所給情景寫出一篇約100詞（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi))的應(yīng)用性短文。
作為寫作B部分的小作文總分10分，大家要抓住得分點(diǎn)。小作文在評(píng)分時(shí)有如下評(píng)分要點(diǎn)：1.信息點(diǎn)——覆蓋全面；2.內(nèi)容——組織連貫；3.語言——準(zhǔn)確性；4.格式——符合要求；5.語域——恰當(dāng)。
預(yù)料之中，今年英語二的小作文再次考查了書信體，并且考查的信件可以說是雜糅型的。這在2011年英語二中出現(xiàn)了同樣的考查方式：
Suppose your cousin LI MING has just been admitted to a university write him/her a letter to：
�。�1)Congratulate him/her，and
�。�2)give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. DO not sign your own name at the end of the letter，Use zhangwei.
同樣的考查方式，足以說明一件事情——絕對(duì)要重視考研真題。老師們總在強(qiáng)調(diào)真題的重要性，好多同學(xué)不與重視，希望大家以后一定要強(qiáng)化這種認(rèn)識(shí)醫(yī)學(xué)全.在.線.提供. gydjdsj.org.cn。
下面我們來詳細(xì)解讀下今年的小作文，首先看一下題目要求：
稱呼： Dear Jack注意稱呼中，后面的逗號(hào)不可丟，也不能寫成冒號(hào)。
正文
建議大家三步走策略——簡(jiǎn)潔、直接、明了：寫作目的、寫作是由、重申目的
第一段：寫作內(nèi)容需涵蓋兩點(diǎn)：寫信目的，表明感謝來自朋友的祝賀；可以采用這樣的表達(dá)方式：I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.
第二段： 寫作內(nèi)容應(yīng)以建議為主體。在這個(gè)過程中可以把日常我們?nèi)绾翁岣叩姆绞綄戇M(jìn)正文，比如多加練習(xí)、多與外國(guó)人交流，多多接觸國(guó)際事務(wù)等。本篇老師主要從這些方面進(jìn)行論述，表達(dá)如下As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. First and foremost, I strongly suggest you that you need to practice with painstaking effort in this field. What’s more, you had better have more communication with foreigners, which guarantees that you have a deep understanding of foreign culture. Last but not least, you are supposed to participate in some international events to accumulate a wealth of practical experience.
第三段：再次強(qiáng)調(diào)重申寫信目的，如Thanks again and I do hope you could take my suggestions into consideration. I wish you have good luck and make a great success in your future study.
落款： Yours sincerely, 特別提醒sincerely后面逗號(hào)不能丟；簽名： Li Ming特別注意 Ming 后面一定不能出現(xiàn)句點(diǎn)。
Part B
48.Directions:
Write an essay based on the following chart. you should
1) interpret the chart and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.(15 points).
某高校學(xué)生旅游目的調(diào)查
參考例文：
As is clearly reflected in the above pie chart, the purpose of students travelling abroad demonstrates obvious differences in one college of China. According to the data given, the purpose of enjoying the beautiful landscape takes a comparatively large share, accounting for 37%, while that of relieving pressure also takes away 20% of the whole proportion.
What triggers this phenomenon? It is not difficult to put forward several factors responsible for this phenomenon. To start with, with the rapid economic development of economy, people, including college students, are becoming increasingly wealthy, which enables them to afford the once-deemed- expensive oversea traveling. In order to enjoy the charming landscape all around the world, a large proportion of students choose to travel abroad. What’s more, along with the ever-accelerating improvement of economy and society is also the ever-increasing work and life pressure. Consequently, the purpose of relieving pressure ranks the second among all the purposes for folks to travel around the world.
In view of the arguments above, we can conclude that the current phenomenon is of no surprise. And therefore, it can be predicted that admiring the scenery and alleviating pressure will still be the main purpose for people to arrange a traveling to other countries.
作文解析
今年英語二作文的題目比較好寫，因?yàn)闃?biāo)題和圖示非常清晰明白。圖表顯示了某高校學(xué)生旅游目的調(diào)查, 考生分析原因的話也會(huì)很簡(jiǎn)單。下面分三段簡(jiǎn)要地說一下這三段應(yīng)該怎么寫。
第一段主要是描述圖表。圖表一目了然，數(shù)量詞百分比也是大家熟悉的詞匯，表述數(shù)據(jù)時(shí)，圖中有四五組數(shù)據(jù)，由于字?jǐn)?shù)的限制以及為了寫作的便利可以突出較大比例的“欣賞風(fēng)景”和“緩解壓力”，注意引入百分比的表達(dá)方式。
第二段給出你的評(píng)論，主要寫這種情況的原因。主要要結(jié)合圖表描述的內(nèi)容從兩個(gè)方面寫起。一方面為什么為了欣賞風(fēng)景而旅行的目的占37%， 另一方面為什么緩解壓力會(huì)占到33%比例。
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